Unwanted Guest
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Excerpt
ย ย ย ย ย ย
ย ย ย ย ย Charisma was in a light slumber but a strategically placed kiss or two could easily remedy that.ย It was the perfect time to propose. Derek reached down on the floor for his jeans to get the ring box out of his pocket. Suddenly the sound of his announcement ring tone for the Slap Shot boomed around the room.
ย ย ย ย ย โScore! Itโs the Pirates for the win!โ
ย ย ย ย ย He tried to silence the cell phone it but it was too late.
ย ย ย ย ย โWhoโs that?โย Charisma stirred.
ย ย ย ย ย โItโs the Slap Shot. I told them no calls tonight.โ Derek groaned.
ย ย ย ย ย โThen it must be important. You better answer.โย
ย ย ย ย ย โNo.ย They have to start making decisions on their own.โ The phone stopped ringing, to his relief. He nestled closer to her. โSee, they figured it out.โ
ย ย ย ย ย โArenโt you the least bit curious?โ
ย ย ย ย ย โNo. Whatโs the point of having management if they canโt handle a problem on their own?โ
ย ย ย ย ย The sound of another ring tone cut through the air again.ย This time it was the house phone.
ย ย ย ย ย โSee, it is important.โย She giggled as she peered at the caller ID display.
ย ย ย ย ย โIย stand by my statement.โย He yawned.
ย ย ย ย ย โIโm getting it.ย If the Slap Shot were on fire youโd never forgive yourself.โย She reached over to the night table and answered.ย โHello.ย Hi Nick.โ
ย ย ย ย ย ย โHeโs in Nova Scotia!โย Derek yelled.
ย ย ย ย ย โHeโs right here.โ Charisma passed him the phone.
ย ย ย ย ย โNick, whatโs going on? They did what?ย Was there anything broken? Where are they now? Did you call the police? No, that was the right thing to do. Thanks for calling.โย Derek disconnected the call and sat up.
ย ย ย ย ย ย โWhatโs wrong?โ She frowned.
ย ย ย ย ย โItโs Jonas and Mike.ย They got into a fight at the bar. They practically tore up the place.โ
ย ย ย ย ย โDรฉjร vu.โ She stood and put on her robe at the foot of the bed then started collecting their clothes off the floor. โWhat happened?โ
ย ย ย ย ย Derek jumped up and gently tugged his jeans out of her hand. โJonas was at the bar getting plastered when Mike walked in. They got into it.โ
ย ย ย ย ย ย โTheyโre always fighting about something.โย
ย ย ย ย ย โThatโs no reason to have the fight of the century in my bar.โย He stealthy put the ring in his underwear drawer.
ย ย ย ย ย โWhere are they now?โ
ย ย ย ย ย โNick took Mike outside to cool off, he hadnโt been drinking.ย By the time he went back to check on Jonas he was gone. Heโd left his car keys but the little shit took off with a bottle of my private reserve whisky.โย He sighed.
ย ย ย ย ย โThe good news is heโs not driving.โย She said as she went intoย the walk in closet, looking for something to wear.
ย ย ย ย ย โI canโt believe theyโre pulling this crap.โย Derek started pacing the floor. โThis is why I didnโt want to vacation with them.ย When theyโre not smashed and fighting each other, theyโre trying to hit on you.โ
ย ย ย ย ย โJonas likes to tell me Iโm pretty because your face ticks every time he says it. They do it to get under your skin.โ She laughed.
ย ย ย ย ย โNobody compliments my woman except me.โย He walked over and kissed her.ย โWhat are you doing?โ
ย ย ย ย ย She held up a T-shirt and jeans for him. โArenโt you going to check on the bar and see where Jonas is?โ
ย ย ย ย ย โRight now, Iโd prefer to take a shower with you.โ He took the clothes from her and threw them on the bed, scooped her up into his arms and headed in the direction of the bathroom. โThe season is over which means my babysitting duties are too. Iโll go assess the damage in the morning. Nick said heโd send me a pic after theyโve cleaned up some more so I wonโt have a heart attack.โ
ย ย ย ย ย Heโd almost made it over the threshold of the bathroom with her when the buzzer like sound rang through the air. This time it was coming from the intercom system downstairs. They had a visitor.ย Who the hell could that be? He gently put Charisma down and went over to the wall panel next to the bedroom door and opened it. He pressed a button and the monitor came on instantly. โAre you kidding me? Itโs Jonas. And heโs at the wrong entrance.โ
ย ย ย ย ย โWhere is he?โ
ย ย ย ย ย โLooks like the side of the building. Maybe the loading bay.โ Derek took another look at the monitor.
ย ย ย ย ย โWell, at least heโs not out somewhere getting into more trouble.โ She went back into the walk in closet.
ย ย ย ย ย He stabbed at the talk button. โWhat do you want Jonas? If youโre here to apologize for destroying my place, we can discuss it tomorrow.โ
ย ย ย ย ย ย โPop, itโs Jonas.โย Jonas slurred.
ย ย ย ย ย โI know itโs you, idiot.ย I can see you on the monitor.โ Derek let out a big sigh and shook his head.ย
ย ย ย ย ย Jonas looked around for the camera and after he finally looked up, he waved.ย Then he started grooming himself like he was looking in a mirror.
ย ย ย ย ย ย โHey man, itโs not a good time. I canโt guarantee I wonโt beat you to a pulp until Nick sends me a photo of the damage.โ Derekโs jaw ticked.
ย ย ย ย ย โThat son of a bitch Mike attacked me at your bar! Can I come up?โ
ย ย ย ย ย ย Derek took his hand off the button. No way was he getting involved in their drama, especially tonight of all nights. His romantic plans were going straight down the tubes. Knowing Jonas and Mike, they were probably fighting over a woman. He was mulling it over until Charisma came over and gave him a look. ย โWhat?โ
ย ย ย ย ย ย โLet him up.โ
ย ย ย ย ย He shook his head like a toddler who didnโt want to eat their vegetables. โTheyโre immature idiots. Iโm not getting involved this time.ย Itโs bad enough I referee during the season.โ
ย ย ย ย ย โWe canโt let him roam around in that state. Some gossip site is liable to get a photo of him stumbling around Philadelphia intoxicated.โย Charisma handed him the T-shirt and jeans again.
ย ย ย ย ย โThis is not how I wanted our night to end.โ He caressed her cheek.
ย ย ย ย ย โI know.ย I was looking forward to giving you a wash and wax.โย She flashed a wicked grin.
ย ย ย ย ย โYouโre killing me.โ He groaned and reached for her but she moved out of the way. โJonas can sleep in the lobby, assuming the concierge doesnโt run him off.โ
ย ย ย ย ย โYou wouldnโt be able to live with yourself.ย Maybe not tonight, but in a few days youโd feel guilty about not helping a friend.ย Itโs one of the reasons I love you so much.โ She slipped on a pair of yoga pants and her favorite Pirates T-shirt.
ย ย ย ย ย โOK.โย He put on his jeans. โIโll go downstairs and get him.โ
ย ย ย ย ย โTake your time coming upstairs. Iโll tidy up the living room real quick and turn on the coffee machine.โย She stood on her red painted tip toes and kissed him.
ย ย ย ย ย ย Derek pulled on the T-shirt as he called downstairs to alert the doorman that he had a visitor at the wrong door. Who would opt to go to a weird side door on a platform instead of an elegant, brightly lit front entrance? Jonas would when he wasย schnockered.ย He slipped on his sneakers and did a slow march out of the apartment. He loved his teammates but there were days when he wanted to throttle them all.ย
ย ย ย ย ย ย ย He punched the button for the elevator and the doors opened immediately. ย He stepped inside, hit the ground floor button and sighed. He totally felt Sethโs pain about grooming the next generation. Heโd really become the father figure of the team.ย He counseled and gave as much guidance as he could but there was only so much you could tell grown, single young men with a ton of money and some celebrity about being discerning. They werenโt looking for love.ย They were looking for fun and good times.ย It was what he did when he was their age. Two minutes later the doors opened on the ground floor.
ย ย ย ย ย The lobby was empty with the exception of a disheveled looking Jonas perched on the arm of the couch talking to the doorman. He could see Jonasโs black eye as he approached. He was clutching the bottle of whiskey Nick said heโd snagged earlier that evening.
ย ย ย ย ย ย โTerrence, thanks for getting him from the loading bay.โ
ย ย ย ย ย โNot a problem Mr. Popovich.โ
ย ย ย ย ย ย โWould youย believe heโs the center for my team?โ He smiled, trying to take the edge off.
ย ย ย ย ย โThatโs Jonas Dudikoff? I hardly recognized him.โย
ย ย ย ย ย โYeah.โย Derek sighed.
ย ย ย ย ย Terrence nodded and smiled as if the name now put the black eye in perfect context.ย
ย ย ย ย ย โYou look terrible.โย Derek rubbed the back of his neck.
ย ย ย ย ย โYeah.โ Jonas put his hand on Derek’sย shoulder. โWell, Mike looks much worse.โ
ย ย ย ย ย โCome on.ย Letโs get you upstairs.โ
ย ย ย ย ย Jonas talked his ear off as they rode up in the elevator together.ย It was mostly incoherent babble but Jonas had a look on his face as if he were a scholar giving a lecture at a university. The mood was further dampened when he returned to the apartment and found Charisma had turned their love nest back into a functional living room. The candles had indeed been extinguished and the music was turned off. The romance had been sucked out of the place all because of a drunk hockey player that was unfortunately, a friend.
ย ย ย ย ย โHi Charisma.โย Jonas slurred as he went over and gave her a hug.ย
ย ย ย ย ย โHi Jonas. Whew.โย Charisma drew back and waved her hand in front of her nose.ย โYouโve been hitting the good stuff pretty hard tonight.โ
ย ย ย ย ย โI was minding my own business at the Slap, drowning my sorrows when Mike comes in like a maniac.โ
ย ย ย ย ย โI hope you know that bottle costs five grand.โย Derek seethed.
ย ย ย ย ย โReally?โย Jonas looked at the label.
ย ย ย ย ย โHow did you get here?โ
ย ย ย ย ย โCab.โย
ย ย ย ย ย โWoman troubles?โย She asked.
ย ย ย ย ย โYeah.โ
ย ย ย ย ย โI hope you know drinking canโt solve everything.โย She gently pried the bottle out of his hands.
ย ย ย ย ย โI know. Why canโt I find a woman like you?โย He gave her a lopsided grin. โYou look so pretty today. Doesnโt matter if itโs those fancy clothes or yoga gear, youโre gorgeous.ย Popovich hit the lottery when he got together with you.ย I hope he knows how lucky he is. Does he treat you good?โ Jonas spied Derek.
ย ย ย ย ย โThank you, Jonas.ย He treats me like a queen.โ She smiled.
ย ย ย ย ย โWhy canโt I meet a nice woman like you? If I had met you first–โ He outstretched his arms to hug her again.
ย ย ย ย ย โHey.โย Derek stepped between them.ย โReel it in Romeo.ย Sheโs mine.โ
ย ย ย ย ย โI was just telling the truth.โ Jonas scowled at him.
ย ย ย ย ย โTell your truth over a cup of coffee.โ Derek pushed him in the direction of the kitchen, Jonas clumsily went on his way. He turned to Charisma.ย โYou have no idea how much I want to kick his ass for ruining our evening.โ
ย ย ย ย ย โI donโt know, you were planning to surprise me with a special evening and someone popped up. It was to be expected.โ
ย ย ย ย ย โWhat do you mean?โ
ย ย ย ย ย โDonโt you remember two weeks after we moved in together and weโd cleared our schedules so we could lock ourselves in and Trina claimed the heat went out at her place so she came here?โ
ย ย ย ย ย โIโd forgotten about that.โ He laughed.
ย ย ย ย ย โAnd remember when we decided to have that romantic weekend before the playoffs started and Theo shows up for a visit?โ
ย ย ย ย ย โYouโre right.ย We do have terrible luck when we try to carve out time for ourselves. I wonder why that is.โ
ย ย ย ย ย โGrandma says itโs because we radiate so much love and happiness that people are attracted to it.ย I guess thatโs why Jonas came here tonight.โ
ย ย ย ย ย โI can still kick him out.โย Derek caressed her arms.
ย ย ย ย ย ย โI know but you wonโt because you are a good teammate and a good friend.ย Have Jonas suck down some of those hot dogs with the works, maybe it will balance out all that whiskey.โย She laughed.
ย ย ย ย ย โI love you.โ He kissed her.
ย ย ย ย ย โI love you too.โ
ย ย ย ย ย Derek watched as she walked toward their bedroom. If he could get Jonas sober and out of the apartment, he just might be able to salvage the night. He had a very important question to ask her and he hoped she’d say yes.
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Derek and Charisma’s love story continues! ย I hope you enjoyed the pre-edited excerpt! ย Release dateย February 24th!
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9 responses to “Playing for Keeps (Book 19 in The Blake Boys Series) Excerpt I”
Someone who has been in these books from the very beginning but has never been explored is Theresa the travel agent. She could be good for one of these bachelors.
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Hi Mary! Theresa is gone but not forgotten! She’s part of the Reed universe. :)
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Love all books in the Blake series.When Morgan was diagnosed with Lupus, she promised to have a day with just Jake. Wll we get a Jake’s Chronicle with Morgan and Jake?
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Perhaps we can have a JC with Jake and his mom. I’ve had a few readers inquire about what their special would be like. :)
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I’m loving this book already
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Another great book. Can’t wait. Need favorite couple.
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Oh!! I think it would be great if Morgan & Seth add to their family! It sure would be fun reading about how he gets her to agree!! ๐
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Oh man!! Thanks can’t wait to read where and when Derek gets to pop the question to our Charisma!!! Wow!! I remember when!! ๐
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You’re most welcome Gee!
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